Thursday, August 20, 2020
Childrens book
g'day guys its ya boy Jayden here with another blogpost today I will be blogging my Children's book I made. So we had a task were we had to make a childrens book we had to come up with an Iparc characters a storyline and a moral my story is about a baby Ostrich who learns all about the animals in the jungle I hope you enjoy.
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G'day Jayden, it's me Sam, a little advice is to work on your punctuation and maybe finding some less 'interesting' pictures of animals you have there. In other words everything is really good and the storyline and plot is the best I have ever seen. Good job and keep up the good work!
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