I saw a Giant swing bridge
I remember water skiing with dad
I was with my younger brother
I wish I backflipped off bridge
I was there on a holiday
I popped a manu off bridge
Tuesday, March 3, 2020
My Sestina
G'day guys Its Ya boy Jayden here With another blogpost today I'm blogging my Sestina which is a poem about a Journey. We are Sending these to a school in Hamilton and they are sending some to us i'm looking forward to seeing there's. SEE YA!
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Bonjour Jayden!
ReplyDeleteWow!You're sestina, is awesome! You wish you backfliped off the bridge? is that safe? Water skiing sounds fun.
I just think that maybe you could add a bit more of an explanation? I'm not entirely sure what the poem is about, I also noticed that you could've added a ',' between 'blogpost' and 'today'.
But I really enjoyed reading your post!
Cya!
Jayde